Writing Critique Groups: How to Run One Online or in Person

Writing Critique Groups: How to Run One Online or in Person

You have read your chapter so many times that the words have gone flat. You know the middle sags, but you cannot see where, and everyone you might ask is either too kind or too busy. This is the point at which a critique group earns its keep. Not a fan club, and not a firing squad. Four or five writers who read closely, say what they actually think, and turn up again in a fortnight.

Setting one up is less complicated than it sounds, but the details matter more than most people expect. Here is how to build a group that survives past its third meeting.

Decide what the group is for

Before you invite anyone, work out what you want from a session, because different answers produce different groups. Some writers want structural notes: does the ending earn itself, is the point of view consistent, does the plot hold. Others want line-level help with sentences. Others mainly want a deadline, and the feedback is a bonus.

Genre and stage matter too. Six novelists at second-draft stage will understand each other's problems quickly. A mixed group of poets, memoirists and short story writers can work beautifully, but only if everyone accepts that the advice will be broader.

On numbers: four to six is comfortable. Three is workable. Eight means someone reads aloud for two minutes and nobody says anything useful, because the clock has already beaten you.

Find your people, then run a trial

Look locally first: library noticeboards, writing courses, open mic nights, festivals, a message in a regional newsletter. Online, there are forums and writing communities where a simple, specific post works better than a vague one. Say what you are writing, what stage you are at, and what you want from readers.

Then hold a trial. Meet once with no work submitted, and let everyone talk about their project and the kind of feedback they hope for. Run one real session with just two volunteers' work. Afterwards, ask plainly: do you want to do this again in two weeks?

Losing a group at the trial is far better than watching it wither in month four.

Shape a session that respects the clock

Most groups settle into one of two formats, or a blend of both.

The read-aloud round

The writer reads their pages, or asks someone else to read if hearing their own voice wobbles them. Everyone else takes notes and does not interrupt. When the reading ends, each person gives feedback in turn, and the writer stays quiet until everyone has spoken. Then the writer asks questions. Budget twenty to twenty-five minutes per piece and keep to it.

The silence is the important part. It stops the writer explaining, defending or correcting mid-flow, and defence is what kills groups. You want the room's honest reaction, not a debate.

The written-circulation round

Submissions go out a week ahead in a shared folder. Everyone writes comments, then you meet to discuss them. This suits longer extracts and quieter members who think better on paper than out loud. Ask for specific notes: point to the paragraph, say what happened to you as a reader. "I stopped trusting her when she lied to her sister without hesitating" is worth ten pages of general approval.

A mixed session

Discuss one or two pieces properly, then give everyone else five minutes on a single page they have brought. It keeps momentum when the group is large or people are busy.

Etiquette worth writing down

Put your ground rules somewhere everyone can see them, and revisit them if the tone slips.

  • Read the whole submission before commenting, not just the opening.
  • Comment on the piece in front of you, not the one you would have written.
  • Be specific. "It lost me in chapter two" tells the writer nothing useful.
  • Lead with what works, but do not pad. Hollow praise costs the writer a revision.
  • Ask questions as well as making statements: "What did you want me to feel here?"
  • Do not rewrite in your own voice. Suggest, illustrate, then stop.
  • Remember the writer decides. Every note is a suggestion; the manuscript is theirs.
  • One person speaks at a time, and no side conversations while someone is mid-thought.
  • What is read in the room stays in the room. Rough drafts are not for quoting elsewhere.

Schedules, deadlines and small logistics

A fixed rhythm beats good intentions. Fortnightly, with submissions due three days before the meeting, is easier to sustain than "whenever we're all free". Rotate who is discussed first, otherwise the same person is always last and always rushed.

Online, keep a shared calendar, a folder for submissions and a chat thread for logistics only. Ask people to name files clearly: "Sam – Chapter 3 – 14 May". Appoint a timekeeper for each session. It sounds fussy; it is the single thing that stops one piece swallowing the hour.

If someone submits but cannot attend, send them written feedback anyway. If someone misses twice without submitting, a quiet message is kinder than stewing. And keep a simple rota covering who hosts, who keeps time and who submits next.

Accessibility, online and in person

Small adjustments keep good writers in the group, and most cost nothing.

  • Use a video platform with live captions, and ask people to speak one at a time so captions can keep up.
  • Share written comments alongside spoken ones. This helps anyone who finds listening tiring, as well as anyone who cannot hear every word.
  • Allow cameras off. Some people concentrate better when nobody is watching them.
  • Circulate material as text, not as a photograph of a page, and use a decent font size.
  • Be clear about time zones if the group spreads further than one region.
  • For in-person meetings, pick somewhere step-free, quiet and well lit. Cafés are charming and terrible for hearing.
  • Offer a hybrid option for anyone with caring duties, chronic illness or a long journey.
  • Say beforehand if a piece contains graphic violence or sexual content, so people can prepare.

Start small, review early, keep going

Run six sessions, then ask three questions: is the feedback useful, is the schedule workable, and what should change? Act on the answers rather than filing them away.

Groups rarely die of disagreement. They die of silence, drift and one member whose comments leave everyone bruised. If someone is consistently harsh, talk to them privately. If nothing changes, invite them to leave. Protecting the group's tone matters more than keeping the numbers up.

And mark the good news, too. A finished draft, a competition longlisting, a chapter that finally holds together. A group that only ever diagnoses problems becomes grim, and grim groups stop meeting.

You do not need a perfect setup. You need a handful of people who read closely, a shared calendar, and the nerve to say, kindly and clearly, that something did not work and why.

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